Another chapter - Bliss! My eyes wanted to race over this and swallow it in one gulp, but the dialog deserved better! I read and reread small sections with a big smile on my face. Have to keep rebuilding my image of *Tommy* in my mind. Brian Slades face, hair shorter than *Sebastion*, kohl eyeliner, black leather hugging...and happy. Then I animate him with a *swagger*, and keep reading!

Silkn - your dialog for all 4 is right on! Love the wit. Arthur is definitely developing. And Brian/Tommy (what are we supposed to call him now?) is getting comfortable in his skin. This is fantastic stuff! :D

*BTW I got 4 hrs last night - better than the night before. Worse news is I'm caught up with LT. :(
Quote: "I fight cynicism. It's too easy. It's really boring. It's much harder to be positive and see the wonder of everything. Cynicism is a bunch of people who aren't as talented as other people, knocking them because they make them feel even more untalented." - EwanCarpe Diem