I went on a short, lover's holiday with my sweetie...and had a fabulous time...but in the back of my mind, I couldn't help thinking, that I was missing out on your new fanfic chapters. :lol

I really liked this chapter...I'm having lovely images of Jack playfully spanking Arthur. I know there's no mention of it actually happening in your story, but I have a very active imagination. :evil

Brian's swollen lips are a delightful image too. ;)

Great news about your novel. Thanks so much for sharing it with us. :D